Basically an idea about a young woman (aged between 18-22). A spoilt little rich kid.
She notices that her body has started to develop and that she starts attracting the gaze of men, even grown men. So she uses this to her advantage at first, just getting free drinks at shops by flirting or getting the geeks in her college year to do her homework. Soon she realises the gaze she gets off most men, she is now getting off of her father. She doesn't really do much, but just decides to tease him a little around the house when mother isn't home. Eventuallly she gets home from college early one day and sees her dad sniffing her panties. She decides to do nothing about it for now. A couple of weeks later her father decides to stop spoiling her so much and tells her that she should start doing things for herself. At this point she kind of decides that she can wrap her dad round her little finger and sway him to keep spoiling her. Eventually she teases him so much around the house that one day when the mother is away on a trip or something she decides to push it further and offer maybe that he can use the pair of panties she is wearing now and the real life image of her being semi-nude in front of him to jack off to. He knowing it is wrong resists at first, until she takes her panties off and throws them towards him, making his erection grow even more and to the point where he can't refuse, but in return she wants say $100. That is basically the start. After that she will up her price for doing more. Extra $50 for a handjob to say $500 for sex. So eventually she will have him wrapped round her finger and he will pay for anything because he can't resist his own daughter. Maybe later on she will secretly tape him getting off over and she will use as back up, but will carry on teasing him and seducing him even though he knows it is wrong bcause she can and she likes the idea that out of all the men in the world, she gets her dad most excited.

I know I have posted this idea on here a couple of times before, but now I have added more detail as to what could happen in this idea. How the daughter could be teasing, seductive and controlling. Basically just wondering if anyone wants to try and write this up as I am to lazy and not well equiped to take on the task of trying to put an idea into words, good enough words for other people to read anyway.

 

18/22 just starting to notice her body ?????
i did that to daddy at 12 an 13

 

il-pam you are in a class all your own.:rose:

 

Ok, maybe she starts to notice her body starting to develop earlier. Say about 12-13, then at about 15-18 she starts using her sexy, young developed body to entice men and tease them. Eventually, growing a little older deciding she milks daddy for all he is worth.

 

Guessing by the lack of replies, nearly everyone hates this idea, or just are not into it.
How can you not like the idea!? It's a different kind of take on the situation. It hasn't really been done before either, not like this anyway.

The daughter, I always imagine to be this little hottie. *not_secure_link*www.baileyknox.com/galleries/Bailey-Knox-Fishnet-Zipset/?id=1556977

I mean come on guys. If she was your daughter, how would you not even think about it once?

 

start typing for us! make it happen captain

 

It has a lot going for it, but it sounds a bit familiar to me. It would need doing well I think.

For me she needs to be younger as il-pam says. That fits the development better and also makes the power play more extreme.

Also it could do with more of an outcome, I'd say. Maybe she has to start out wanting a particular (big) thing? That conventionally she wouldn't be able to have. Like her mother, by force ?

 

I am terrible at writing. I already had a brief go at it and posted the outcome on here. It wasn't great. Like MrSoftee said, "It would need doing well..." I wouldn't being doing it justice. So please!, I beg that someone write it up decent enough people will enjoy it.

This is the very bad start of this idea that I made ages ago.

*not_secure_link*stories.xnxx.com/account/story/32551/edit

If anyone reads that, please try and enjoy it and please try and look past the errors.

 

We can't open that link with its being in edit mode. You need to paste it into a post here .

IMO we'd also need your ending, ideally.

 

Sorry about that. Here, you should be able to open this link.

*not_secure_link*stories.xnxx.com/story/32551/Daughter_has_her_price.

 

Well I think you write perfectly well. The impression it gives me is just that you need to get organised a bit more.

So I mean focussing on what's important to the PLOT. Ditch the first 2 paras and the rest of the buildup, start with a sexy daughter as that's what matters.

Give her some character so that there are hints of what's going to happen, like she was always a girl who wanted things, quite determined and a bit manipulative etc etc.

He was always a bit weak and oversexed.

IMO it has to happen as soon as it can, i.e. when she develops.

Build in the new bits you mention.

Then you need the ending. Where does it all lead?? I think you've just lacked direction and that's 90% of why you're not enjoying it.

So I think you should keep going .

Personally my ending would be something like she brings her underage gf round, he fucks her, she films it and he has to get the girls a place to live together, dumping him .

 

I think I know roughly how it will happen.

Like you said, she has always been a daddys girl. She doesn't really see eye to eye with her mother. At the age of 13 her body starts to develop. By 15 she has realised that she is alot more developed than most girls her age. She sees the way boys, teachers and men look at her. She uses this to her advantage, getting drinks, giving the teachers little glimpses down her cleavage for a passing grade. It is coming to the end of the school year and she will soon be 16 and so her mother tells her it is about time she got part time job so she is able to buy her own clothes. The daughter doesn't like the idea of this so decides to do something about it. Aswel as teachers and grown men taking an interest in her, she notices when ever she is around her own father that he different. He can't keep his eyes off of her. She notices he has to cross his legs when she is in the room. So she realises she can work this to her advantage in both ways. She can get her dad to get the mom off her back about getting a job and she can also make dad do what ever she wants, as long as she plays her cards right.
Being no stranger to sexual situations, she knows how to get men going. She may be young, but she isn't stupid. She starts flaunting her body around the house alot more when her mother isn't home. Coming home from college in her uniform all short and low cut giving the father glimpses. Teasing him. Eventually she notices some of her panties going missing. One scene hopefully be set around the dinner table, when she starts stroking her dads thigh with her feet, rubbing his cock aswel, right under her mothers nose. Eventually she will come home from college early to find her father jacking off to a pair a panties in her bed. This is where she will start to take control. She will stop him from jacking off and propose a deal of say $50 and she will undo a couple buttons on her top and let him carry jacking off. Next time she will offer more but a higher price. The dad will try to resist, but all her teasing he will be powerless to. Eventually she will let him fuck her and cum inside her but a mega price. A car she will demand. Then it will end with just controlling him through teasing and she says she will only allow him to have sex with her again if she can film it. He being under sexual spell will eventually agree and she will then hold that over him.

Please someone write it! I might attempt to do it, but it will be awful.

 

I think it's your vision and you should run with it

You write easily well enough, just read up about whatever you're not confident in - dialogue, sentence structure, whatever - and tell the story that's in your head.

I can see already any version I did would not be the same as yours.

Look at stories on here to guide you about paragraph spacing, and check the badly written ones to see yours will be BY NO MEANS the worst written :excited:

Look forward to reading it

 

pretty cool

 

Looks like you have already decided for me that I will be writing it up.:excited:

 

Yeah go for it

 

This was done very quickly. I didn't use any spelling correction program so apologies now for the poor spelling. Just a rough starting version for now. See how it goes down.

Milking daddy dry. Literally.

Part 1.

I like to think I'm your average working, family man. I have my own house, my own car, a very good paying job. Not to boast, but I make nearly four times of that of an average persons salary. So with this money, I like to try and make sure my family have the best things in life. Having two children and a wife though, it's not easy. You could have all the money in the world and still they will find something that I can't give them. Let me introduce myself. My name is David Jones. I am a loving husband to my wife Sandra of 18 years and a loving father to my two children Harry 21 and Louise 16.
The reason I say I like to think of myself as your average working, family man is because there is something that stands me out from most other fathers. I have begun to lust over my teenage daughter. It's not that I don't love my wife. I do lover her, very much so. It is just that it is hard to ignore that she is getting on abit. Sandra being 49, her sex drive is slowly decreasing. So I can't help my eyes beginigng to wonder after a couple of weeks of no sex because she 'can't be bothered' or 'isn't in the mood'. So unfortunatly and shamefully, my eyes have begun to gaze in the direction of our daughter who at 16 has developed into quite a young woman. It doesn't help when she comes back from college on a hot summers day with the buttons on her blouse undone so you can see right down her cleavage, also having her skirt riding higher than washing line.

It all started a couple of months ago. Not long after her 16th birthday. She had asked for a car aswel as many other things. Me being strict, I told her she would have to work towards getting a car. A car is something you don't just get, you have to earn it. Get a part time job. They are expensive things. I can't be buying her everything for the rest of her life. Anyway, seeing as I have a free house most of the time whilst my wife works, my son is at uni and my daughter at college. I have recently been doing alot of the house work, which includes the clothes washing. One day whilst doing my household chores, I started doing the clothes washing. Putting the clothes into darks, whites and colours. As I was doing it I picked up a pair of what I thought were my wifes panties. Picking them up, at first I thought I felt dampness, then I had the urge to investigate a little more. So I pulled the panties to my face and began to smell them. The smell was sweet and fresh. I couldn't get over the smell. I had never smelt my wifes panties before. In fact, I had never smelt anyones panties before, but these had really turned me on. I started to feel a bit of life in my trousers. I figured something must have turned her on recently and that she might be up for a bit of mess about after she gets back from work if these red and white cotton panties are to go on. So instead of using the panties to my advantage right there an then, I thought I would save myself for my wife who I was hoping might make me a lucky guy tonight for the first time in the last three weeks.

I waited around for a couple of hours. First Louise came flying through the door with her stupidly sexy college outfit on. I made an effort to try and not stare to much at my own daughter, but no matter how hard I tried, I think she could tell she was having some sort of effect on me. We watched abit of afternoon tv together before she went to her bedroom to do some work, or most likely chat to her friends on facebook. Finally, a good 4 hours had passed since I had the stirring in my trousers from smelling my wifes panties. Eventually she came home. She cooked dinner, we talked about the normal stuff. Work, friends and family before we decided to go bed. Now I was getting excited again. Thinking I might actually get lucky tonight. We got to bed and she left the side light on so she could read her book. I got under covers and started to slowly carressing her thigh. I slowly moved my hand further up, hoping she wouldn't decline, she hadn't so far. My hand finally got to her pussy and I leaned in to kiss her to hopefully get this underway when she sharply moved onto her side facing the other way.
"David, not tonight, I have a long day tomorrow. I just want to read the end of this chapter and go sleep."
With that I got up in one of my moods and headed towards the living room to watch some late night tv and finally get a release for my excited, unwanted cock. Still confused over why she refused my advances. Especially after I found her soaked panties.

As I put the tv on mute, I had an idea. I went to the pile of now dry and washing and fished out the panties I had smelt earlier. I decided to use them as my main turn on as I whacked off to erotic tv on the adult channels. Brining the panties to my nose, I swear I could faintly smell the smell I smelt earlier. This turned me on massively. Knowing that my wife was still active down there and she could still be turned on. It didn't take long for me to blow my load. After all, it had been about three weeks since I had any release, even self release.

After my late night excitment I decided to put the now cum soaked panties back in the pile of clean washing and let my wife sort it out in the morning before work whilst I lay in.

"Bye love, have a good day. Make sure Louise gets to college on time." my wife said as she kissed me goodbye on the cheek as she left for work. So much for my lay in. I got up and headed for the bathroom. On my way I went to knock on Louise's door, make sure she was awake. Just as I was about to knock, the door opened and stood there was my own daughter in just her bra and panties. I was dumbstruck. I couldn't take my eyes off her breasts. Slowly my gaze lowered to her panties, which is when it hit me. She is was wearing the panties I jerked off into the night before. They were my daughters panties I was sniffing! My daughters panties I jerked off into! I was overcome with shame but at the same time it turned me on. Knowing that my daughter was now wearing the panties I jacked off into. Right there my daughter become alot more sexual to me. Right then was then I truly started to lust for my daughter. Whilst I was thinking all of this I was still stood with my jaw on the floor, eyes popping out and staring straight at her.
"DAD! Look away then! Go away!"
Her voice hit me like a brick wall, I realised I was still staring. My cock started to twitch and she noticed the movement in my boxers as it started to grow.
"eww, you perv!"
I quickly ran for the bathroom where I furiously started to jack off to mental images of my daughter. Mental images of what I had just saw, her in her underwear. I knew it was wrong, but it felt so right. It was the best release I'd had in weeks. problem was, how do I come out of this bathroom and act all normal to take her college, when she had seen waht effect she had on me. She herself and reffered to me as a perv!

 

Milking daddy dry. Literally.

Part 2.

After the mess I had just made in the bathroom, I tried to collect my thoughts and pull myself together. I came out of the bathroom and went downstairs to the kitchen where I was suprised to find Louise all dressed and ready for college.
"Hey daddy!" she said, acting like nothing had just happened.
"Ready for college? We will head off in 5 ok?" I said trying to act like nothing had happened aswel. The response I got though was not what I expected.
She got up from the kitchen table and slowly walked over to me. Her eyes locked on mine. Her long legs slowly creeping across the floor under her short skirt. Her cleavage on show like usual.
"I don't want to go college today daddy" she said in her little girl voice. The voice she uses when she wants something. "I feel like I should be able to stay at home and relax. Don't you daddy?" and as she said that she slowly trailed one of her fingers up the side of my leg, to my hand and up my arm.
"Erm...yes...no..no Louise. You have to go to college" I weakly spat out.
Her next repsonse threw me even more.
"But daddy, after what just happened, I need to relax. All these feelings I am feeling. Maybe I should talk to mum about them after college if you are so sure that I should go" she said, this time moving her face closer to mine. Her lips inches from mine. Her hand now caressing my lower lip as my mouth is wide open. her being so close, so touchy, my cock begins to stir in my pants again having not just been unloaded minutes ago.
"erm..Lou...I don't know..." I said in response. Half of me wanted to let her stay at home as it was my day off and the way she was acting, I might get a little show out of her with out her knowing of course. On the other hand, it would be wrong. I know what she is doing. I can't let her take advantage of me like this. It could a dangerous road. With out time to properly reply she turned and walked away, swaying her beautiful hips side to side making the short, nearly non-existant skirt sway aswel.
"Thankyou daddy. I think I'm going to go for a swim seeing as I'm not going college today." She said as she walked away.

For the rest of the day I decided to try and stay away from Louise. I decided to to lock myself away in my office for the rest of the day. As it so happens, it wasn't that straight forward. The window in my office looks out into the garden. In the garden in where the pool is and that is where Louise was swimming and sunbathing. Obviously knowing she was out there, I couldn't resist peeking and spying on her. Her young firm breasts under that thin material she called a bikini. I had an idea. I quickly went to her room and saw the pile of clothes she had obviously taken off to go swimming. In that pile were the famous panties that got me into all this trouble. I decided to hell with it. I quickly got the panties and ran back to my office to the window over looking the pool. I quickly had my pants round my ankles and began stroking off to the image of my daughter sunbathing by the pool whilst having her panties wrapped round my cock. At one point I swear she saw me in the window. I didn't bother moving. I was to close to orgasm and the idea of her seeing me turned me on even more.

After spying on her through the window, I stayed in the office for the rest of the afternoon until my wife came home. Thankfully I finally had an excuse to come out of my office. Unfortuantly it was for a meal around the table with my wife and daughter. My wife had picked up a chinese on the way back from work. As I got to the dining room I noticed Louise was dressed back in her uniform. Most likely to keep up the appearence that she had gone college so her mother wouldn't start asking questions. As we tooked into the food we all began to talk about what we had done today. I found it amazing when my daughter began to tell the events of her day. Saying how I drove her to college, she met Jessica, her best friend and went to class and so on and so on she went. Telling her own mother this convincing lie. I was amazed at how easily she was doing it. As she was talking I felt something touch my foot and then slide up my lower leg, on my shin. I looked to my wife to see no reaction or clue that is was her. I then looked to my daughter as she was telling the story to her sultry eyes delv deep into mine. She was slowly moving her leg up mine. I couldn't move. I was shocked. Suddenly it went silent and I realised Louise had stopped talking. Sandra was telling us how her day went. I didn't listen to a word though as my dick came to life in my trousers from the touch of my daughter caressing my leg under the table right in front of her mother at the dinner table. Then as my wife paused to cut up some meat on her plate, I saw Louise motion the words "I saw you jacking off over me today." she mimed as her foot went right for the prize. She slid her foot right up to my cock and began to rub the length of it.
"Yeah, so it wasn't a great day. Pretty knackering to be honest" my wife said out of nowhere.
Then Louise quickly spoke, looking straight at me the whole time. "So you had quite a hard day then?" She knew what she was doing. Emphasising the 'hard' in her sentence.
Everytime my wife looked away Louise would wink or blow me a little kiss. I had to try and stop it. So just like she had mimed to me, I tried the same to her. "Stop it!" I forcfully tired to mime. This seemed to only spur her on even more as her foot rubbing got more intense and quickened.
Sandra carried on talking. I have no idea what about, I was in a world of my own. I caught little bits of her talking.
"She has invited me and Louise to spend a weekend down there" she said.
"Oooo" Louise said. "I don't know. I would want dad to come." She teasingly said. Once again she knew what she was saying.
Her rubbing got slow, but it was still effective. The whole situation had me very aroused. If she carried on I was going to cum right there in my pants.
Sure enough, she did carry on. "Do you want daddy to come?" she asked her mother.
Yeah, I suppose he can come if he likes. I would have..."
I didn't hear the rest of the sentence. I came in my pants right there in front of my wife. My daughter had made me cum right in front of my wife by just rubbing her foot against my cock. The feeling was amazing, but of course the feeling of shame wasn't far behind.
My daughter got up and left the room and headed back to her room. "Tahnkyou dad!" She said as she left. My wife left confused by that comment as it was her who bought the dinner.
I just sat there in silence, trying to eat the rest of my dinner whilst my wife went to the kitchen to clear up.

 

Great start I loved it!

I really liked the development, building the anticipation and setting the scene.

Not quite sure about the cumming at the table, for me I started to lose my belief in the story for that bit, tho I guess it has happened! And does it accelerate the story too quickly, once he's cum for her?

Anyway the writing is fine, simple and readable so you should definitely keep going IMO. Add in some tlc with the spellcheck and so on, more paras, a tidy up, and it's going to be a great story. You really carried me with you

 

Milking daddy dry. Literally.

Part 3.

After what had happened at the dinner table I was lost. Mainly mentally. What just happened was so wrong, yet it turned me on so much. She was my own 16 year old daughter teasing me under the table right in front of her own mother, with out her mother knowing. It was so wrong, but such a cliche thing to say, but it felt so good at the same time. If anything, this little stunt by Louise had caused me to lust for her even more. After that dinner I had to change the trousers straight the way. I figured I would what happened rest for a couple of days and maybe speak to Louise about it. Tell her it can't happen again.

A couple of hours later, after just watching tv with my wife, I got a call from upstairs. "Daddy! Will you come to my room please. I need some help." She said.
This is the last thing I need. I wanted to give it some time before we would need to be in the same room together. I tried to shrugg it off. "I am watching tv Louise. Is it important?" I tried to act normal as my wife sat next to me.
She replied back. "Yeees! My curtains have fallen down. I need them putting back up otherwise all the neighbours will see me getting changed. Please daddy!"
As I hesistated to get up my wife jumped in on the conversation. "Go on David, fix it for her. I'm nearly falling sleep anyway so this film is getting wasted on us."
This was the last thing I needed. I eventually got up and headed upstairs towards Louise's room. While I would be fixing her curtians I thought about maybe the talk I wnated to have with her. It would be alot earlier than I had hoped, but at least it would be out the way.
I got to her room and walked in to see her just buttoning her blouse up. A different blouse. Was she going out? My mind pulled itself together after seeing her busting bra as she done up the blouse. "You...you going out?" I managed to ask.
"Yeah, going round Jessica's. Just trying to find something to wear. All my outfits are old and all the same."
I replied back with a typical man reply. "I think you dress fine."
I saw a glint in her eye as I said that. "But I could look so much better daddy." and as she said that she pushed me towards her bed forcing me to sit down and then went and closed her door.
Lou..Erm..Loouise. You look fine, you don't need any better clothes, now erm, lets fix these curtians." I looked round to the window to see the curtians sitting perfectly as they should be.
"You think I look the good the way I dress daddy?" She said in her little girl voice. I could tell by the change of her voice this wasn't innocent father and daughter talk.
"You know what I mean Louise" I said and as the situation heated up, my cock began to move.
"I think I do know what you mean daddy." As she looked down to my crotch. Just then she slid down her skirt to reveal the panties I couldn't resist not long ago. She noticed the movement of my eyes staight to her panties. "Look daddy, even my underwear are getting old. These panties have staines all over them."
I looked down embaressed. Did she know I had used them to jack off into?
"Do you think I could get some new clothes daddy?" As she said that, she started to take her panties off right in front of me. She made sure to stand sideways so I couldn't get even the smallest of glimpses. I was brought back from my daydream as she spoke again. "So daddy. Can I get some new outfits? Give me some money and I will buy some tomorrow and show you!" She walked over to her set of draws and pulled a new pair of panties on whilst holding the old ones in her hands still.
Confused and dazed, I managed to reply. "Money? Er..how much? $40? Should be enough shouldn't it?" I began to pull my wallet out.
"I don't know daddy. I was thinking more of $120." She walked over to me after putting her new panties and put one foot on the bed inbetween my thighs. She then slowly dropped the panties that she had in her hand to the side of me.
"Put them in the bin please daddy when you go downstairs. I have no use for them anymore. Anyway, $120 then please." Her foot slid up towards my cock. $100 Louise. $120 is too much." I couldn't give her the full amount. I had to keep some control.
$130 actually daddy. I just remembered the nice set of lingerie I saw the other day. They were abit costly though." She laughed as her foot now rubbed against my cock through my trousers. I had a pefect view of her panty covered crotch. I wanted her so bad. I wanted my daughter to just push me down on the bed and straddle me, but I had to keep in control. The touch of her foot rubbing against my cock was electic and then to top it off she placed her finger in my mouth to suck. Weakly I just strated to suck like a schoolboy lost in a sweet shop. "$100." I mumbled as I carried on sucking her finger. She started to make moaning noises as I sucked her finger. It was all fake, but hearing my daughter making noises like that was a real turn on. "oooh, daddy! Please, $140 actually. ooohhh, please daddy!" she moaned.
"$130! Ok, $130." I gave in. I was willing to give her $130.
"140$ daddy! Pleease!" she started to pull her finger away from my mouth and her foot was slowly withdrawing. I had no choice but to give in. "Ok Louise. You can $140." She got me. She got what she wanted from me. She carried on taking her finger back and her foot and stood up straight. She leaned and gave me kiss on the lips whilst her right hand trailed down to my crotch. She teasinly rubbed in and then walked out the room. "Thankyou again daddy! Dont forget to put them panties in the bin." she said coyly.
I looked down to see them beside me. With my cock hard as a rock and these panties in possesion, I decided these panties were not going anywhere near the bin. It doesn't take a genius to work out what I did with them instead next.